13 Ways: Out Past the Reef
td Whittle
Posted on September 26th, 2011
She never liked it when the sand was messy, preferring to find an unfrequented patch of shore, where the only footprints were those of seagulls. Yet he would insist on plunging in with both hands, digging and gouging at the ground like a wayward child seeking China.
What was worse were the artless structures he would erect, piled high and higher still, leaning this way and that, ugly but fragile, begging to be slammed to the ground, then pummelled into the beach, where they towered like sentinels.
He was helped in this by the waves, as he would build always at the water’s edge, taunting the sea to reclaim his monoliths – or perhaps he meant them as an offering.
She never knew.
What she did understand was that this had become his ritual upon arriving at the shore, on those yawning summer afternoons, while she watched, as surely he wanted her to do, inwardly shaken by a terror she could neither recognise nor articulate.
Distracting herself was sometimes easy, sometimes not.
She unpacked and laid out on the blanket her own expressions of art: baskets and bowls of food, which she’d created with great attention to detail – just the right amount of crispness to the golden fried chicken; sweet paprika on creamy potato salad; tropical fruits with whipped cream; and, most importantly, a shaker of chilled Martinis to take the edge off both the heat and her nerves.
A thermos of coffee awaited them at the end, after which they would pack up the car and return to their ordinary days and nights, to the dove-white town house with the matching hybrid tea roses in the courtyard. She thought about those pale and delicate blossoms now, and about the insidious fungi and insects that could so easily destroy them.
A pair of crows stood on a nearby blanket, pecking at the crumbs left there, and she wondered when the couple who had set up this ad-hoc picnic might return. They had not bothered to safeguard anything, from passers-by or local wildlife.
They were not young, so she had been surprised to see the two of them, hand in hand, run laughing down the beach, and then – she supposed believing they were out of sight – strip off their shorts and tops, plunge into the sea, and head out past the reef.
She had watched until she could no longer make out their heads bobbing like corks in the waves.
Text by td Whittle.
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That piece is so penetrating and soul touching! I just see how She is stunned to witness there’s another way to live – not on the ordered pattern and from people least expected to be involved in such irresponsible behavior. Perhaps this sight will make her put up a little easier with those differences She dislikes so much about her husband? Who knows…
Thanks so much, Jeane. I appreciate the support. It's good to know we are not just whispering our words into a void. I wish I lived at the beach. It is magical for the soul, I think.
Oh…I love this! I live at the beach and can't go more than a few days without my feet touching the shore. You are wonderful at painting images with your words.
Yay! Thanks, Fred!
I think I'll put you on my W.O.W (website of the week) button starting tomorrow (Sunday). I usually leave people on there for a week or two. My site is comedy, but my friends know that I have a serious side, too. Humor bloggers are great, but it's refreshing to read a little fiction or poetry, too.
I think I'll put you up on my W.O.W (website of the week) button starting tomorrow (Sunday). Mine is a comedy site, but my friends know that I have serious side. Humor bloggers are great, but it's refreshing to get some good fiction or poetry now and then. At least for me it is.